Headlines and Tone Testing: Are You Able to Get Your Message Across?


Writers often depend on headlines to create appeal for their write-ups. Headlines, after all, are often the first line of writing that a person reads when he comes across an article, news story or book. A headline can create curiosity, stir up interest and generate wonder. The tone of the headline also affects the readers’ response and elicits reactions right then and there. For proper headline creation and tone testing, here are some things to keep in mind:

The headline should set the tone

Whether your write-up is upbeat, formal, businesslike, provocative, engaging or a call-to-arms kind of thing, the tone of your headline should reflect it. Very often, your goal as a writer helps set the tone of the headline and the subsequent body of the write-up.

Are you trying to give information? Raise a question? Intrigue the reader? Create a sense of urgency? Decide on the goal of your write-up first and this will help guide you on finding the tone for your headline.

Write down the keywords that define your article

This is especially important if you will be writing for the Web and quite useful even if you will be writing for print. Keywords are words that reflect or represent the main idea or topics that will be found in your article. These keywords should then be found in your headline.

Although some keywords are rather neutral in tone, there are some that best express the feelings or emotions that you might find appropriate for your write-up. Write these words down so you can decide later which one to use to achieve the best effect. When you go through tone testing later, this effect will be easier to determine.

Write down the words that reflect the tone of your headline

Some words, like adjectives such as ‘truly’, ‘really’ and ‘absolutely’ set the tone of the headline, making it seem like what you have to offer is the ultimate. These words give a sense of exclusivity and can help your headline stand out. ‘How to’, ‘Guide to’ and ‘Tips for’ are often used in headlines to set the tone for an instructional article. Action words, on the other hand, set the tone for enthusiasm, making the headline sound urgent.

Tone testing
So how do you know that you truly have the right tone for your headline? Test it. Go online, use at least three search engines and type the headline you’re planning to use. Use the exact words initially to test the headline.

Once the search engine has produced a listing of results, go to the top 3 or 5 of these links and check how relevant your headline is. Read the articles as well and check if the tone is similar to the tone of writing you wish to use.

As part of the audience, you should be able to tell if the tone of the headline works. Test it against your reaction and how you responded to the headline and the subsequent body of the article. Check reader reactions in the comment section as well. There’s a good chance you’ll find frank assessment of the write-up there. Then use what you’ve learned to apply in your own writing.

Test the tone with a limited audience. Try showing the headline to friends and ask them what they think. More importantly, ask them what kind of emotion/s the headline produces. If the answer is exactly what you intend the headline to create, you’re on the right track. If not, revise the headline.

You could also tone test the headline by posting it online. Then change the words strategically to see the kind of reaction you receive. Once you achieve what you want, stick to that headline.

Posted by: admin on May 24th, 2010

6 Practical Tips for Effective Headline Development



A lot of the positive responses a write-up will receive rest on the headline. The headline is the title of the article and is the very first line on which the reader’s eyes will fall when reading a write-up. A bland, unexciting headline will fail to stir the interest of the reader even if the body of the article is well-written and informative. Never waste a good article by making sure you use these tips for effective headline development:

Outline your article.
The headline and the article body feed off each other. One must reflect, promote and support the other in order to be effective. As such, it’s important that you build a relationship at the very beginning so your readers won’t be confused at the progression.

To make sure you don’t get lost, write a short outline of the article. This can be in the form of notes to help guide you on the topics you will be covering for the article and the succession of these topics. That way, you will have a reference on how the article will appear, something you can use for effective headline development.

Decide on the tone you will use

The tone of your article should be reflected by your headline. An optimistic, happy headline may not work with an article that is written in a serious, businesslike tone. Conversely, a formal headline may seem ill-conceived when used with an upbeat article.

Develop your headline based on the type of article you will be using

Ever read headlines developed by researchers for a certain scientific or medical study? They’re not exactly the kind of headlines you’ll find in a write-up for topics such as sports, personal care or relationships. These headlines tend to be formal and technical and there are no colloquial or slang terms used with them.

When developing headlines for your article, make sure it’s a good match to the type of write-up you will be doing. If it’s more technical, consider using a more structured headline. If it’s more upbeat, then do the same with your title.

Offer an overview.
Your article has to compete with others in the market. This is especially true if you will be writing for the Web, where for a single topic alone, readers will find thousands of sources, all of them original.

For effective headline development, make sure to write a title that offers your readers a good idea of what the article contains – and then interest them enough so they read the rest of the article.

Headline too long? Consider a sub-headline

Sometimes in order to grab the attention of your readers, you will be stuck with a headline that’s too long to be effective. If this happens, consider cutting the headline into two: one as the main headline and the other as the sub-headline. Readers can easily focus on these headlines and find the most interesting, salient points of the article.

Or, you could cut a long headline, use a provocative or interesting word or phrase followed by a colon and then write the rest of the headline. Some examples are below:

Game Hacks: How to Be a Master of Every Video Game You Play

Earth Angel: One Woman’s Journey to Becoming a Celebrated Environmentalist

Birds of a Feather: How Your Friends Affect Your Luck in Life

Use intrigue

Notice how successful many of the marketing campaigns and promotions have been in the past? It’s because the copywriter was able to stir up intrigue and grab attention by using their headlines well.

An excellent method of headline development is using teasers that create intrigue. Words such as ’secret to’, ‘little known ways’ ‘lazy man’s guide to’, ‘beginner’s guide to’, ‘you don’t have to be ___ to be ___’ and ‘methods you never knew existed’ can be quite effective for making the readers wonder and want to read more.

Posted by: admin on May 24th, 2010

Writing Copy? Why Grammar Is Not Everything and What You Should Do About It



It may seem like a contradiction but grammar is indeed not everything when it comes to writing copy. When producing an article, news story or press release, there are various factors that have to be considered in order to write truly exceptional copy – the kind of copy that people will find useful enough to actually finish reading. Find out what these are and learn how to use them together in order to maintain balance in your written work:

Content matters, first and foremost

Content in this context refers to substance – the overall worth of the write-up. It doesn’t refer to the number of words used or type of words you chose to use. What does your write-up say? What value can the readers get out of it? Are you substituting good grammar and big words because you have nothing else to say?

Although you shouldn’t be afraid of big words, it’s always better not to complicate things for your readers. Determine your target audience first – their interests, capacity, what they find useful and interesting – and then write for them. By placing more importance on what your readers can get out of your write-up, you will be producing more substance out of your copy. After all, what’s great grammar if there’s nothing good in what you have to say?

Focusing solely on grammar is distracting

One common mistake among writers is obsessing about grammar when they begin to write. As a result, they get distracted, derailed from their train of thought. Imagine having a really terrific idea and then worrying over where to place a comma or which clause to use first. The great ideas and content that could have come out of you as a writer and made your writing better can get lost or confused with other ideas and concerns.

When writing, don’t worry too much about grammar, at least at first. Write down words as they come to you. Don’t let the subject of grammar bother you when inspiration strikes. Only when you’re done should you then go over what you have written to check and improve it. Only then should grammar be a concern. After all, how can you proofread something you haven’t even written yet?

Even the greatest focused on substance and not on form

The great American writers Ernest Hemingway and William Faulkner had a famous rivalry. Faulkner, a writer praised for his intricate prose style (that initially confused his readers), criticized Hemingway’s trademark simplicity.

Hemingway fired back, saying that there are ’simpler and better words’, even saying that Faulkner shouldn’t think that ‘big emotions come from big words’. Refusing to give in and use what he called ‘10-dollar words’, Hemingway continued to write in his simple, easy style. He is still a well-loved and much-admired author today.

Grammar is not everything, but…

Grammar may not be everything but it is still a major component of good copy. You can’t just ignore the value of good grammar because it isn’t the be-all and end-all of writing.

Good grammar is equated to professionalism and is considered the true sign of a skilled and experienced professional. Furthermore, it’s also considered as one of the signs that what you have written is reliable. Bad grammar, on the other hand, is for amateurs, lazy writers and scammers.

Although grammar is not everything in writing copy, don’t ignore it. Use it as a means to improve what you have already written and progress as a writer.

Posted by: admin on May 23rd, 2010

Tips for Setting Your Copywriting Rates



A copywriting job can mean brisk business, especially for writers who have the skills and experience. However, that is only if the writer knows how to strategically price his copywriting services, something that can be very tricky, especially for beginners. Setting a rate for copywriting can be confusing, particularly because you don’t want to overcharge and turn away prospects or undercharge and not be paid what you deserve. Here are some of the most important things that you should consider when setting your copywriting rates:

Different copywriters charge different rates

This is due mainly to the type of skills you have, your writing expertise and experience. Beginner copywriters, for example, cannot charge the same rates as more experienced ones.

The key here is to prove that you can deliver. Even if you have the skills but don’t have the experience, it can take a while before you can charge a rate as high as those charged by a copywriter with more experience than you do. This, even if you will be writing on the same topic. A Web article, for example, may cost only $75 for a beginner copywriter while a more experienced copywriter may charge at least $120.

The type of writing and topic

The type of writing project and its topic will also affect copywriting rates. An article written on a general topic, for example, may be charged at a lower rate than a write-up about a project with a specialized topic. Article writing, newsletters, brochures, ads, ghostwriting a book, news stories, press releases, etc. – require different types of research and styles of writing.

The type of research that has to go into writing will also influence the rates – the more difficult, intricate and technical the writing needs to be, the higher its rate. Extras that add value to a copywriting service such as search engine optimization or writing using HTML can also allow a writer to charge more.

To give you an idea how much copywriters charge for their services, here are some ballpark figures you might find useful:

For articles that will appear on a website, copywriters charge anywhere from $100 to $400 per write-up. If you choose to charge by the hour, the range can be anywhere from a low of $50 to around $85. For Web content that will fill 10 pages, you might want to charge for about $1,000 to $1,500, depending on the type of content.

For press releases, copywriters often charge from $300 to around $600 while others may charge lower, starting at around $100 or $150.

For sales letters, freelance copywriters usually charge a whopping $1,000 to around $2,000 per letter. Some, such as those still building their portfolio, can charge from a low of $200 to around $500.

The number of wordS

Many copywriters charge per word while others prefer a set number of minimum words per write-up. These become the basis of their copywriting rates. For example, a copywriter may charge a lower rate for a 300-word write-up than he would for a 500-word article.

The frequency of the writing project

There are different copywriting rates set for one-time writing projects and for continuous assignments. Copywriters will generally charge a slightly lower copywriting rate for continuous projects than for one-time only articles.

After service
As part of their copywriting services, copywriters often allow one revision per article which is included in the set rate. Further revisions and additions are sometimes billed extra or based on a per hour rate. Copywriters may charge from about $30 to $70 an hour to make their revisions.

Self-marketing

Believe it or not, how much you can charge for your copywriting rates will also depend on how well you can sell your writing skills. If you’re unsure of what to charge and less confident about your writing, you’re likely to charge a rate that is less than what’s reasonable for your level of skills and experience. Know your skills and be confident so you will never have to charge an unreasonable rate.

Posted by: admin on May 23rd, 2010

5 Ways to Write Copy and Avoid Being Clever and Critical



There are times when writing can inspire such strong emotions that you find yourself becoming critical or overly clever. While it may sound or look good to you and a few people who know you, it may not always have the same kind of reception with the rest of your audience. By using a tone of writing carelessly, you might not get the kind of results you want. Here are reasons why you should avoid being clever and critical just to write copy and how to improve your writing instead:

Being overly clever is seen as arrogance

You’ve probably come across writers who try too hard to impress their audience. You will agree that they often seem condescending and annoying. The reader’s usual reaction is often, ‘What, does this writer think I’m dumb?’

By being too clever, you’ll alienate your audience, who won’t be too pleased at being subjected to a write-up that seems to insinuate that they are ignorant. Instead, speak to them the way you would to a respected colleague and don’t simply assume that you know better.

Being critical can ruffle the wrong feathers

There are writing styles and topics that call for a writer to use a critical tone. Satire, for example, is very often critical. However, really great writers still manage to inject good humor into the writing, which is actually a sign of genuine talent.

When writing reviews, for example, you also need to be critical in order to inform the reader the positive and negative points of the person, event or product being reviewed. Being critical could be harsh but if you can phrase your sentences well, your write-up will be easier and more fun to read.

Be like Shakespeare

No, it’s not about iambic pentameters and rhymes but being able to state the obvious without doing so. Instead of confronting the issue upfront by being clever and critical, find ways to describe, illustrate, critique or opine. You can add words, omit some, use metaphors and other tricks of the language. The key here is to produce a well-written piece. Just don’t overdo it, though or people will know you’re trying to be clever.

Avoid strong language

You don’t have to be offensive just so people will know that you have something to say. Sometimes, writers can’t help using strong language when trying to be critical about something.

Some writers may even use strong language in the hopes of preventing boredom in their readers. However, this trick often backfires since not everyone is appreciative of language used only in B action movies and street fights. If you use strong language out of context, your readers might think that you are either trying to be clever or being overly critical.

Instead of falling into this trap, turn to useful references such as a dictionary or a thesaurus for better alternatives. You’d be surprised at how well you can write copy that expresses exactly what you want to say using well-chosen words. You’ll gain more respect for it.

Use humor instead

Instead of being clever and critical when writing copy, consider appealing to your readers’ funny side. Some of the best writing ever produced used humor to express opinions and ideas even about the most serious of topics. Doing so will allow you to explore a different aspect of your subject and to offer your readers a means to see things in a different light.

Posted by: admin on May 23rd, 2010

7 Ways to Show Authority in Writing a Copy


One of the goals a writer has in copywriting is to convince the reader. Good, authoritative copy is very easy for readers to trust because it sounds more truthful and caters to their wants, needs and interests. As a result, response rates are better and there is a higher likelihood that the desired results are achieved. Integrating a tone of authority in writing a copy is a studied process but it is not entirely impossible. Here are the top 7 ways you can improve your copy and make it more influential and convincing:

Know your topic

Never write copy about a subject you have little or no knowledge about. If you want to prove you have authority in writing that copy, you should be able to show your audience or readers that you know exactly what you are writing about. Your readers can tell if you’re only bluffing.

Prove your experience

Another way to show you have authority in writing copy is by proving you have the correct experience about the subject. You can’t write about rocket science with authority if the closest you’ve ever come close to a rocket is by watching a fireworks display.

Use your USP

Every product, idea or statement has a USP or unique sales proposition. Find out what yours is when writing copy. The USP will help define your statement and make you stand out from write-ups that have a similar idea. You can use this to your advantage to create authority.

Make the statement clear so your readers will understand immediately the message you are trying to put across.

State the benefits and advantages

There will always be disadvantages or limitations to your product, idea or statement. Instead of detailing them to your readers, focus on the advantages and benefits. Tell your readers what it can do and what it can’t do.

If you’re promoting a bicycle, for example, you don’t have to state that it’s not as fast as a car. It can’t fly but it can help its user reach his destination. It’s cheap, doesn’t pollute the environment and can even be an instrument of fitness.

Use facts

Embellishing your statements may sound harmless but the effect on your readers may not be advantageous to you. Consumers and readers are a bit sensitive and they will take it personally if they find that you were pulling the wool over their eyes. There is nothing that works as fast as an overstatement to decrease your credibility.

If you want to have authority in writing copy, state only the facts – statements that are easily verifiable.

Back up your claims

Authority in writing copy is similar to writing news stories – you need proof of your statements. If you make one, make sure it’s backed up by details and figures that may be corroborated. If there is a study, research or statement made by an expert that will support your claim, use that as well. So in case someone asks, you can point them to the reference that will support what you said.

Don’t mess with the language

If you want to be trusted as an authority in writing a copy, make sure you take care to show good grammatical and spelling skills. Nothing destroys an authoritative position than bad language because it speaks of carelessness and a lack of knowledge. If you want to be seen and accepted as an expert, show respect for your readers and write well.

Posted by: admin on May 22nd, 2010

Copywriting: Tips From Pros



Before the advent of the Internet, copywriting was a profession limited to the print media. However, at present, copywriting is breaking new frontiers each day. Marketing has transformed to a whole new thing and copywriting has become one of the most potent weapons or marketing.

The whole concept of copywriting has undergone a sea change after the arrival of the internet. There are specific types of internet copywriting that were not existent in the past. Nowadays, internet copywriting also means Search Engine Optimization, Keyword Density Disguise and viral marketing. These terms, that most of us were not even familiar with before the arrival of the internet, are now into daily copywriting jargon. The main objective of any copywriter today is to divert the traffic to the required website. Thus, a good copywriter also needs to be experienced and aware of the different SEO concepts that play a very important role in the generation of website traffic.

The world has indeed become a small place with the advent of the internet. And one of the emerging global professions is copywriting. You can place an order from the United States or the British Isles to someone residing in India. However, the tough competition from around the world means that the service providers need to keep on working hard. Quality is one of the most important things in this profession and every writer strives to deliver his or her best. Although copywriting can be a very demanding job, writers often enjoy the challenge and it actually drives to perform even better.

If you really want to become a copywriter but you do not know where to start, you can look around your city for a place that provides training to copywriters. In order to become a successful copywriter, you need to ensure that you are aware of the new techniques of writing. Thus, a stint at a standard training school can do you a world of good. You can also search the internet for advice on copywriting. Moreover, the best way to improve your skills is through reading a lot of articles. Once you get the hang of the style, tone and the use of words in an article, you will be able to write on your own.

Once you begin copywriting, there is one thing that you need to pay special attention to. Before taking on an assignment, ensure that you understand the requirements perfectly. In case you have any doubts regarding any particular instruction, ask your client about it before you start writing. As they say, it is better to be safe than sorry. Communicating with your client properly is an important aspect of successful copywriting.

Another very important thing about copywriting is that you must maintain a professional attitude. Although most people copy write on a part time basis, even then, being punctual and professional is very important. Take on the work that you are sure you will be able to do and then deliver it on time. Punctuality, professionalism and skill are the three things that can make you a successful copywriter.

Posted by: admin on May 16th, 2010

SEO Copywriting



One of the first thing that comes into the mind of someone who has created a website recently is that – “How do I get my site noticed by the top search engines?” if you fall into this category and are currently worrying about the same things, read on to find out great new ways of getting your site great rankings in the search engines. At present, there are numerous search engine marketing firms that use a few Search Engine Optimization techniques to fetch good rankings for their clients.

The search engine optimization or SEO techniques, as they are commonly called, help the users get more clients and more page views in their site. There are many specialist writers, designers and marketing personnel who work for SEO techniques. These individuals work hard to find new ways of getting your website good ranks in the search engines. The basic objective is to get your site excellent rankings. You can employ SEO techniques to get good rankings, and the key is to get your site in the top rankings of the search engine so that the person surfing the net visits your page.

Many people think that all that these SEO techniques do is to make better metatags that will help get good rankings. However, this thought is clearly wrong because there are many other factors that affect the rankings of a particular website. The SEO techniques consist of many other things. One of them is purchasing text links. Purchasing text links buying an ad on a particular website so that each time someone clicks on the ad, they are diverted to your website. This technique is not dependent on the search engine rankings that your website receives. Although this method is also used to increase the traffic to the site that is being advertised, the search engines are capable of making a distinction between the site and the advertisement.

You need to be very careful when selecting a SEO marketing companies.

This is because there are many SEOs that try to manipulate the traffic of the search engines wrongly. This is quite unacceptable and you need to ensure that you do not fall into the snares of such an SEO. There are many SEOs that tell you that they have a so called special relationship with Google or have “priority submit” declaration to Google. Beware of these kinds of SEOs as they do not optimize the search engine rankings fairly. Although many SEOs are really dedicated towards honestly increasing the rankings of a particular site, you have to be extra cautious because of the spurious SEOs.

In case you want to submit your site to Google yourself, there are two ways – you can submit your site through “Google Sitemaps (Beta)” program or avail of the “Add URL” service. Note that both are free services.

Posted by: admin on May 16th, 2010

Copywriting: Let Your Copy Bring You Results



Whenever you embark upon writing an advertisement for any media, be it a newspaper, the yellow pages or even a flyer, you can stick to some basic strategies that will help you have a good impact upon those who read the advertisement.

Given below are certain points that will help you magnify the effectivity of your advertisements:

* The placement of your ads is very important. You need to have a good ad, but more importantly, you need to place your ad in such a medium that gives your ad the maximum exposure to the targeted audience or reader. If you can reach out to your prospective customers, you will be able to be successful.
* Many people make the mistake of putting in the name of their company as the header. This is known as tombstone advertising and is not very pleasing to the reader. Instead, if you want your prospective customers to be attracted to your business, make an attractive line the header. This line must tell the reader how he or she will benefit by using your products or services and this will help you draw customers.

Remember that most people are not interested in what your company’s name is initially. Thus, giving your name won’t help in the least when you want to advertise your products or services. A much better approach consists of trying to convince the customer that your services are indeed good and they will profit from doing business with you.

* Your advertisement must be specific and directed towards the definite people who require your services and can be prospective customers. Thus, making your advertisement to the point is very crucial to creating a successful advertisement. If you can attract the right kind of people who are likely to do business with you, you will emerge as the winner.
* Try to attract your customers by giving a limited period offer. This strategy will help you get the customers as the discount or offer that you give will make the prospective customers call at the earliest.
* Often, individuals do not wish to engage in business with new companies because they are afraid that they might be a loser in the deal. However, you can do your best to reduce the fear of your prospective customers by giving them an added incentive like a discount. You have to make your prospective customers realize that they will be the ones to benefit from the deal. Also, try to come up with a guarantee. A guarantee is a very effective tool and in most cases it helps your prospective customers overcome the fear and become your customers! Giving them this assurance will help your business boom.

To sum it all up:

* The headline is a crucial part of your advertisements and this is where you must grab the attention of the reader.
* Be very clear and give all the information of your products and services.
* Claim only the things that you are sure that you will be able to deliver. In fact, in order to increase the rust and reliability factors, you can display the views of existing customers.
* Give a great offer to entice your customers into calling you instantly.
* Give something like a guarantee and ensure that the customer feels secure while doing business with you.

Posted by: admin on May 16th, 2010

Importance of Headlines



You do not get a second chance to make a first impression; same is the case with your sales headline. If you are unable to attract your potential customers in one go, chances are high that they will never ever go on to read the second sentence. Instead the customers who could be yours will move on to may be your own competitor. So it is important that you never overlook the importance of headline. Once you yourself have made a good headline, you can see for yourself hoe much it is worth. You will be amazed at the incremental sales that this will be able to get.

Consumers have very short attention span, if you have not been able to grab their attention within the first 3 seconds, they will be gone and possibly gone forever. The headline must be such that it attracts the consumers and makes him want to learn more. If your web site starts with a boring opening line such as “thank you for taking out the time to visit our website”….then it is almost equivalent to bidding goodbyes to your potential customers. No one wants to read this trash.

A good headline is one that captures the attention of your readers, engrosses and interests them and then eventually leads to a sale. There are few magic or fire words, which if used are sure to attract the attention of the readers, some of these words are that directly address the reader such as “how to” “do you” and also “discover”. Just like these magic words there are other tragic words that absolutely kill your head lines, never and I repeat never use words like “learn about” and “buy” in your headline.

Studies show that almost 80% online sales are made on the basis of the headlines. So you can well figure out that with an unattractive headline, you put at stake 80% of your chances to sell your product. It is not that headlines will take you days to write. If you keep the few key words in mind, you can make your own headlines that will spin money for you in minutes.
The sooner you realize the importance of headlines, the better it is for you and your company, a headline has the potential to increase you sales by a whooping figure of 80% stating this fact, it is an obvious truth that the significance of headlines can never be overemphasized.

Posted by: admin on May 15th, 2010